I was trying to see youstop playing boo
i'm trying to get that new
can i check the mic... one..two
us meeting is long over due
so I'll see you in a few
when my grey skies turn blue
Ok that's all I got... and only took me less than a minute... can't think of anything else that rhymes. I know it's nothing like the dime lines, but I hope you'll feel me just the same.
***Kudos to a special someone that was the inspiration for this via IM.
Ok Now your turn... 5-7
liner... all rhyming and
you have to do it off the
top of the dome...Let's Go!
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Do yo' thang hun
Looked like a lotta fun
Every new day under the sun
Will make it easier ta make ya run
Wanna say I 'preciate cha a ton
I'm up, I'm out, I'm done
damn g... why you had to show me up at my own spot (sigh)
still love ya though!!!
so many times
I wish I had the time
to tell what time it is.
but time runs out,
the watch is broken,
and after this line,
the poem ends
I wish i was that good.. gonna have to decline....
The more you do it the easier it becomes. I think it's a great start, you can only get better. You are lot better than I am, that's why I write fiction it's hard for me to be so concise in a limited format.
Ok, let's give it a try
Not gonna lie
don't know what comes next
i think i'm vexed
my mind's gone blank
awe...mine dime line stanks
Is it you I see
staring at me
wondering if this can be
if only we
take the time to see
if it's more than chemistry
I love off the dome poems
How are you gonna be half nekkid azz nekkid and expect folks to pay attention to poetry.
im simple
@jewell - too dope for words... I likes
@slaus - I am NOT "nekkid" he point of the pic was to show me deep in thought...geeeesshh!
Its funny how life throws you curve balls
one day you're in the next you're out
one day you're up the next day you're down
one day you smile the next day you frown
but I'm saying this to say..
you never know the day,
but life always has its way!!!
Since my last bootleg poem wasnt really romantic ish
here goes anotha:
it was twelve o'clock when i saw him
no. it was twelve oh two
he was
walkin down the street
6 foot three inches of fiiiiiiiine
im tellin you
when i saw him
knew it had to be divine
.....intervention
there really is no need to mention the little problem i have with
with ....romantic retention
because im sure this one right here is meant to be mine
did i already mention he was 6'3 inches of fine?
Working on A Saturday
Man, this shidd is...
A word that I prolly shouldn't say.
At least i got the music on.
can't wait til this day is done.
And you are nekkid azz nekkid! Trying to front and ish. How the menfolk sposed to come with it? lol
Betta late than never
Called out on my own site
Figured I might as well gon type
Something that reads right
Eb likes the Dime Lines
Gave me a shout out
clectik back wit no doubt
Would love to blow her back out
If I hit the NY Celeb I'll be chasin
Make her change the blog to
e-b relaxation.
Loves it E... even though I dont understand all these blog fellas having these sexual fantasies about me... I digs ya dime lines **Kudos**
whenever i get drunk
i turn into a wanna-be punk...
rocker, but rockin' cazals and door knockers
i been known to be the "white girl" because i speak proper
stop her
the defintion of a show stopper
-karrie b.
here, peeking around
surprised at what i found
i said, this chick is down
thick mental, pound for pound
NY, stay proud, so deep, i drown
new cool, too true to ever clown
but jest, i do, to stay around...
I reached my palm to you
to only snatch it back
I want to put my trust in you
But togetherness we lack
Theres no I in Team
At least thats what they say
But you dont here that
So now my love has slipped away.
Str8 of the dizzy...kind of going through something..hopw it was meaningful to some :-)
OH ISH!!!
I didnt count the lines!!
Oops...sawry..lol
DAMN!
y'all got skillz, but alas, a poet I am not...so I'll pass...
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