Off the dome...

So I envy E so much and his dime lines... every piece of poetry that I post here is always written down prior and then posted. But the boy Eclectik comes straight from the dome in the post. So here's my attempt to come straight from the dome.
I was trying to see you
stop playing boo
i'm trying to get that new
can i check the mic... one..two
us meeting is long over due
so I'll see you in a few
when my grey skies turn blue

Ok that's all I got... and only took me less than a minute... can't think of anything else that rhymes. I know it's nothing like the dime lines, but I hope you'll feel me just the same.

***Kudos to a special someone that was the inspiration for this via IM.

Ok Now your turn... 5-7

liner... all rhyming and

you have to do it off the

top of the dome...Let's Go!

22 comments

Sojourner G February 28, 2008 at 10:09 PM

Do yo' thang hun
Looked like a lotta fun
Every new day under the sun
Will make it easier ta make ya run
Wanna say I 'preciate cha a ton
I'm up, I'm out, I'm done

Eb the Celeb February 28, 2008 at 10:12 PM

damn g... why you had to show me up at my own spot (sigh)

still love ya though!!!

swag_ambassador February 29, 2008 at 1:51 PM

so many times
I wish I had the time
to tell what time it is.
but time runs out,
the watch is broken,
and after this line,
the poem ends

K Dyme February 29, 2008 at 3:15 PM

I wish i was that good.. gonna have to decline....

MrsGrapevine February 29, 2008 at 4:07 PM

The more you do it the easier it becomes. I think it's a great start, you can only get better. You are lot better than I am, that's why I write fiction it's hard for me to be so concise in a limited format.

Mizrepresent February 29, 2008 at 4:51 PM

Ok, let's give it a try
Not gonna lie
don't know what comes next
i think i'm vexed
my mind's gone blank
awe...mine dime line stanks

Jewells February 29, 2008 at 5:03 PM

Is it you I see
staring at me
wondering if this can be
if only we
take the time to see
if it's more than chemistry

Slausin-Ass Slaus February 29, 2008 at 6:39 PM

How are you gonna be half nekkid azz nekkid and expect folks to pay attention to poetry.

im simple

Eb the Celeb February 29, 2008 at 7:32 PM

@jewell - too dope for words... I likes

@slaus - I am NOT "nekkid" he point of the pic was to show me deep in thought...geeeesshh!

Special K February 29, 2008 at 9:50 PM

Its funny how life throws you curve balls
one day you're in the next you're out
one day you're up the next day you're down
one day you smile the next day you frown
but I'm saying this to say..
you never know the day,
but life always has its way!!!

dejanae March 1, 2008 at 12:49 AM

always flippin shit around
so i came out ass first
to put it in medical terms
i was a
breach birth
guess thats why im always talkin shit
often mistake the
crack of my ass for those of my lips

dejanae March 1, 2008 at 1:08 AM

Since my last bootleg poem wasnt really romantic ish
here goes anotha:


it was twelve o'clock when i saw him
no. it was twelve oh two
he was
walkin down the street
6 foot three inches of fiiiiiiiine
im tellin you
when i saw him
knew it had to be divine
.....intervention
there really is no need to mention the little problem i have with
with ....romantic retention
because im sure this one right here is meant to be mine
did i already mention he was 6'3 inches of fine?

mp1 v.8.0 March 1, 2008 at 10:17 AM

Working on A Saturday
Man, this shidd is...
A word that I prolly shouldn't say.
At least i got the music on.
can't wait til this day is done.

mp1 v.8.0 March 1, 2008 at 10:19 AM

And you are nekkid azz nekkid! Trying to front and ish. How the menfolk sposed to come with it? lol

eclectik March 1, 2008 at 8:14 PM

Betta late than never
Called out on my own site

Figured I might as well gon type
Something that reads right

Eb likes the Dime Lines
Gave me a shout out

clectik back wit no doubt
Would love to blow her back out

If I hit the NY Celeb I'll be chasin
Make her change the blog to

e-b relaxation.

Eb the Celeb March 1, 2008 at 8:30 PM

Loves it E... even though I dont understand all these blog fellas having these sexual fantasies about me... I digs ya dime lines **Kudos**

karrie b. March 2, 2008 at 2:33 AM

whenever i get drunk
i turn into a wanna-be punk...
rocker, but rockin' cazals and door knockers
i been known to be the "white girl" because i speak proper
stop her
the defintion of a show stopper

-karrie b.

N. Steven March 2, 2008 at 5:27 PM

here, peeking around
surprised at what i found
i said, this chick is down
thick mental, pound for pound
NY, stay proud, so deep, i drown
new cool, too true to ever clown
but jest, i do, to stay around...

Ms.Lady March 2, 2008 at 9:55 PM

I reached my palm to you
to only snatch it back
I want to put my trust in you
But togetherness we lack
Theres no I in Team
At least thats what they say
But you dont here that
So now my love has slipped away.

Str8 of the dizzy...kind of going through something..hopw it was meaningful to some :-)

Ms.Lady March 2, 2008 at 9:56 PM

OH ISH!!!

I didnt count the lines!!

Oops...sawry..lol

The Jaded NYer March 5, 2008 at 1:11 PM

DAMN!

y'all got skillz, but alas, a poet I am not...so I'll pass...

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