The fire has been lit
and I can't stop smiling
Glowing
Laughing
Not only physically
but mentally he challenges me
Teases me
and not just where I orgasm
Places that make my soul high
Tried to play hardball
He threw me a curve
I embody losing control
So the fire never dims
His diamond and I'm rough
Embraces make me putty
Smirk at crackling wood
Uninhibited
Lighting a path unknown
Allowing myself to feel
Pleasing sensitivities
Temporarily vacillant
Love reciprocated in two-fold
Unprecedented triumphs
Immensely complete
Engulfed in air that is finally pure
Aflame to the future
Burning ember of magnesium
Our fire
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41 comments
man in pic needs other end in mouth my two cents
so that fire never dims
u got skillzs
That is HOT!
That was FIRE...let me get my behind in the shower!
Wow, I love.. positively LOVE... Oh btw, you've been tagged. your turn!
sexy
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nice, so who you got you feeling HOT??
Fireworks on the net...:) Great poem.
@intro - why somebody had to get me hot though... why cant I just be high on life...lol
That was FIYAH!!!
sizzling....hot!!!
I am on fire.
"So the fire never dims
His diamond and I'm rough"
Yea - that was FIYAH workin'!!
& u can talk that smack to intro all u want - all us grown folk know sumBODY gotcha OPEN;-). Enjoy Li'l Sis!!
whooo! lol.
mhmm... just a summer love indeed...
ebb..that was steammy...go on,who is he?
@CAP- lol... aint nobody got me open... just been able to smile at certain thoughts and its been a while since that happened... so when it did the words just started to flow this way
@F&F - aint no "he"... yet...lol
good thing I'm married or I'd be seeking TROUBLE after reading this.
who's the artist, BTW?
the artwork is Light my Fire by WAK... I love his work... have 5 or 6 pieces in my house by him... this one here hangs over my headboard...lol
At least you advertise what you expect of your bedroom "visitors". He can't say he didn't know.
that picture makes me feel something special....heehee. lmao! where'd you get it....
PS Your poem is FLY!
@flygurl - you can go to www.wak-art.com
hey now! That's good stuff right there.
ahem...love poems Eb??? *side eye'g you*
that was definitely hot and i'm sorry but where there's poetry there's always a muse
Sister,
YOU KNOW WHERE ELSE THIS OUGHT TO BE POSTED...PHOTO INLDUDED!
PCHATS!
Beautifully written!
' his diamond and am rough'
aarrrrgh , EB, u cant imagine how sexy that sounds....its a turn on i tell u
do u hear me snap, snapping????
ooo hun. that was inspiring.
Oh yeah, somebody is getting their back blown out. -- LOL. Inspiration like this doesn't come just because the sun is shining. Something is going on somewhere.
Either way -- two thumbs UP!
imma need you to start postin more of these more often missy!! loooves it!
FIRST OFF..THE PIC SET IT OFF!!! AND YOU WENT *IN* ON THE POEM! CONGRATS.....ONLY A WOMAN WITH A LOVE JONES COULD WRITE A POEM LIKE THAT....im inspired to write something like that now :)
who's the inspiration?
That artwork is amazing!
That's fire!
That was serious right there good job.
WOW.
Love that copyright at the end lol.
Poem was def. hawt, I think that was my first time reading one of your works. Hope ya fourth was great :-)
ah eb i love ur poetry!! you need to try n get a book published. oh and idc about ur copyright, if i wanna steal it, ima steal it. im ur sis and you love me! :)
Oooo Weeee
Give it.
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You already know it was hot. I'd love to hear you perform it in person at a spoken word joint.
yeah, put that hot NY voice of yours to it.
Loving the poem! And that is one of my favorite pieces of art :)
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